Because of you my life is great
For you love are the perfect mate
In every way you're tried and true
My life is great because of you
My heart does sing my soul does dance
With rhythm in our fine romance
Euphoria ecstasy you bring
My soul does dance my heart does sing
I have been blessed because of you
Wonderful things you say and do
Keep me content I'm never stressed
Because of you I have been blessed.
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Option 5
Written February 1st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- The rush hour II...or two by -PumpkinSeeds-.
400 points, ended October 15, 2006, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 130 titles by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended August 21, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww such sweet words, the person that you love is very lucky to have you, as you make them sound so wonderful, they are probably big headed now as you boosted their ego so much
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Great
This was a wonderful poem... I really like this one... good luck in my contest -
Well done and wonderful movement throughout. Congratulations on the gold..well deserved.
~Michelle~
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Nicely constructed and expressed. Moving and heartfelt.
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i love this alot its how i feel with my boyfriend...great rhyming and flow great job and good luck in the contest
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it brought tears to my eyes
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