My Wench
I watch her there tied to the cross, her body squirming in anticipation.
The red rope clashes with her milky white skin,
the rope that has bound her to the cross, from her wrists to her elbows.
Matching red rope ties her legs to the bottom of the cross, immobilising her.
In her mouth is a blue ball gag, the leather cuts into the sides of her voluptuous mouth with ruby red painted lips.
There are tears in her eyes as I bring the flogger down hard on the soft flesh of her breasts.
Will she safe-word out on me I wonder.
Knowing her taste for pain I am positive she wont.
Laying the flogger down, I pick up the nipple clamps and attach them to her nipples.
She flinches.
I smile sadistically.
Picking up the scalpel I twinkle it in front of her eyes making sure she sees the shining metal glistening in the light.
Placing it on the table for a moment I blindfold her.
Pick it up once again running it softly over her breasts. She inhales as quick and sharp as possible with the gag.
My beast approaches.
Taking the tip of the blade I press it against the centre of each of her throbbing nipples,
Piercing just them deep enough to draw a single drop of blood.
I yank the clamps off.
She screams a muffled scream and faints.
Author notes
Written February 1st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me your Best! ( adult - alternative) by Dragonsong.
300 points, ended February 5, 2006, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Erotic Challenge Season 6 by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Perfect
This tell perfect what you feel during it. well done.
You are a intresting person/writer.
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This is scary stuff. Really scary. I also know that you definitely are capable of doing this. I loved the images you played with. It made me all hot and bothered. Hope you are doing well.
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Thank you so much for your comment Tanzanite, it is a nice surprise. things are very well with me thank you, and i hear congrats are in order
hope this message finds you happy, purring, and in love.
ang
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Very nice....yum... I love to read a little BDSM, this is something that could be continued I don't know if you have but it is a thought. Very well written.
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Thank You for commenting Mistress Rose, it is greatly appreciated. i had not actually thought of continuing this piece, but it is something that i should perhaps look at.
thank You
ang
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This is a very good write, though up against the background I did find it a bit tough to read. However, the write itself is simply awesome.
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Thank you for commenting Master Ktulu i didnt realize that it was difficult to read, and shall be doing something about that immediately.
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This looks much better and it is much easier to read...please do not forget to join the group for the challenge
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Magnificent
Ang, my sis, that was one hell of a write, there. The imagery is outstanding. I could see and feel everything - even the pain. This was hot, dark, sensual and very very imagery indeed. Well done on this, Ang [ should have won gold in my opinion. But, then again, I am not a judge].
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thanks my dearest Brother, although im convinced in your opinion all my work should be gold
thanks
ang
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thank you so much for reading this piece applepie
ang -
heh interesting piece =P I'm not all into erotic poetry but this was good and I liked the descriptions ^^ keep up the good work~!! thanks for sharing this piece ( and congrats on the trophy!)
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thank you kindly nesorb. this was written with a cerain little submissive person in mind . . . my sadist comes out every now and then *bats eyes all innocently*
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~bows to your amazing talent~
My erotic poetry has nothing on this!
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thank you so much Dins. ~kiss~. i know we are going to have loads of fun with the newsletter and i can see myself type my fingers to the bone . . . .
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Oooooh…Special my Friend!!! One or two slight editorial changes may be needed… but we can discuss that , This one I really love! Well Done and thank you for entering!
~Dragonsong~
( ..and a quick grope for good measure ~wink~)
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Wow am I glad you are not a domme. Sheesh, you do have a beast jinkxie. The picture will stay with me tonight hun.
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Really enjoyed this. Pity there was a word limit, I wanted more!
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