Lazy bass slumbers
Immersed in halcyon dreams
Sharp-eyed eagle dines
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Written December 21st, 2002
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A contest entry
- I want a traditional Japanese haiku or a untradional haiku. Just 1. If you do a traditional it has t by Nam.
82 points, ended December 23, 2002, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Liked that twist in the last line - tradition 5, 7, 5 syllable haiku you penned here a great golden winner. This one goes back a long ways but it is nice to recycle older poetry and let others read it for the first time.
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