You kissed my lips, i started to melt
i knew it was right, i knew it felt
like we would live to the end of time
we loved each other. it was so fine
hold me in your arms so tight
never leave this lovely sight
make me warm when i am cold
be my knight, ever so bold
you found me when i was all alone
took me in and made me your own
we've been together for whoever knows
we know each other, no one can pose
you kissed my lips, then let me go
the tingle stayed, but faded slow
in our eyes, i could see
both of us were meant to be
Author notes
this was just something short i wanted to make for no apparent reason. strange how i know how you feel when you're in love, yet i've never had a crush yet....
Written January 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- options for everyone. Prewrite accepted. by HowardsDaughter.
350 points, ended March 15, 2006, 17 entries
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i love this, your flow was really good and its described beautifully.
well done and goodl uck
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great
wow loved the emotion even though you never had a crush. i felt you were in love. keep up the great work.
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