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The Best Kiss

TH
E

 BE
  ST

 K
  Is
 s

      A
     Tiny
   Drop of
  Heavenly
  Chocolate
 Warms hearts
More than heaters
As much as hugs

Author notes

Just a test for length-not the piece in all likely-hood.
Written January 31st, 2006

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 22, 2006
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    Jeff, I think this is a wonderful piece you've done. Form poetry is not so easy to get aligned sometimes, but personally I liked the "sway" of it and the sentiments behind it are fabulous! Well done Blessings, Gypsy


  • lavender shadows
    February 2, 2006
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    Try centering this, then working from there. (trust me, it works better)


    A
    Tiny
    Drop of
    Heavenly
    -Chocolate-
    Warms hearts
    More than heaters
    As much as hugs

    (the other part you can fix to how you want once you've centered it)



    Edited on Feb 02 because ''.


  • Forlorn Sorrows
    February 1, 2006
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    No, that's what I'm trying to fix, it's completely flat on the one side if I center it...

  • lavender shadows
    January 31, 2006
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    Jeff:
    This looks ok in general... I think that centering it will probably help get the last part better aligned. Perhaps, if you have more words to say, you could make the bottom part bigger.


  • imprisioned soul
    January 31, 2006
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    awesome

    this is beautiful i really loved it.

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