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How Dumb Can I Be?

How dumb can I be
To loose your friendship
Over something so small,
So stupid as this....

Why did I have to say anything
Why couldn’t I just keep my mouth shut
Wishing I could turn back the clocks
Wishing I could take back my words

Will our friendship ever the be same
Will it ever return to how it use to be
Why am I so stupid… so, so stupid
That I just had to say something...

Why can’t I think before I say something
Anger towards myself pouring out
Tears wanting to come, but...
Remaining in my pain filled eyes

Kasey, I’m sorry.

Author notes

My emotions written down, I guess you'd say... *sighs* Why'd I have to say anything? (please don't ask if you don't know)
Written January 31st, 2006

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  • Cheeky paper
    February 7, 2006
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    Dear Tim ;

    This poem is really well written and it is really actually how i feel at the moment ... Gosh! your poem made me speechless ...
    --papergirl


  • purplebubbles
    February 3, 2006
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    correction, dumb , in a literal meaning means someone who cant talk and really you can talk , so thats point number 1 : D
    ahh but its a really sweet and emotional poem. You obviously care alot and it makes me sad to see it.... well i dont know how to explain, it makes me sad to see a little reflection of my past in someone else, but then to know what the ending was...but anyway great poem, dont let me worry u please
    xxx

    mars


  • LetTheBirdFly
    February 3, 2006
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    aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww i'm soooo glad you two are okay again... this is so sweet!!! i love it i love it i love it i LOVE it!! i wish i knew what else to say... i'm just glad you're not fighting any more... it would have been very awkward being friends with two people who hated each other... the emotions in this write are soooo strong. you're so good at expressing your feelings. you have a lot of talent. this is another great write... but then again, you have a lot of those... exellent job, tim
    aleicia


  • Master-Mush
    February 1, 2006
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    ouch... i no that...*shudders* im sooo sry this had to happen...ugh. im glad she read this tho! and it looks like itll work out... but ugh. *sighs* im really sowwy.... *nothing much i can say...*



    mushy


  • KaseyL
    January 31, 2006
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    *hugs tight* you're a great friend Tim. And everything you think, say..even if it is out of anger...is just a part of that. It wasn't because of the saying what was on your mind..it was the anger building inside me and you not allowing me to speak with you about it, to understand..to give you my case of it.

    I know you need your space, but that was just a misunderstanding..and it just went overboard. You scared me with the it's over thing...you're a great friend to me, and I'll always forgive you..even if you stab me in the back multiple times.

    I love you like a friend, and hopefully we'll be able to stay friends for a long time.

    *hugs* I have no idea what to say now..just please...don't scare me like that again, please.

    ...how are you supposed to comment on a poem that's about you??
    Edited on Jan 31, 7:32 p.m. because ''.


  • January 31, 2006
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    so i wont ask...sounds like your in a bad position though.
    good work as always

  • cutiepatootie
    January 31, 2006
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    very nicely done..

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