Dead trees rushing by
Fast moving streams of people
Slowly revolving
Author notes
Written January 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- haiku-o-matic by leander.
500 points, ended February 7, 2006, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hmm, there is some imagery in there, but for the most part it feels as if you were telling this instead of showing... thank you for entering though
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