If ever I find the truth about life
I will pass it along to my children and wife
If ever I see His glory above
I know it will be from His life giving love
If ever I hear the Angelic song
I'm sure it couldn't last nearly too long
If ever I get the direction I need
It must be from Him to help me succeed
If ever I falter in this quest that I make
I pray His forgiveness and my soul He will take
For only the truth, His glory and song
Can lead in the end, to where we belong
Author notes
I do hope this write is uplifting to those who read it. My hope it that what I write will be received well by others and stimulate some thought in those who have needs. Thank you for taking the time to read this poem.
Written January 31st, 2006
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Hi Fallen from Me:
I think your comment hit the nail on the head. In the end is what will count for all of us. How we get there will make a difference, but in the end we must strive to be where we belong. Thank you. Bill -
Hi SoulFullHeart:
Thank you so much for your comments and insight. I do appreciate your comemnts as they reinforce the ideas I try to convey and work for. You can visit my work any time. Bill -
Hi bigcountry:
I will take all those comments that a person wants to give. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem, the comments of others and making your comments as well. It is great to have fellow poets make such wonderful comments. Thanks.
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Hi Scotlass:
You are most welcome. Thank you for such wonderful comments. I so enjoyed you sharing your reaction to this poem. These kind of comments help spur a writer on to want to share more with others. I really appreciate it. Bill -
Hi Shattered-dreams-xx:
What a wonderful way to express your comments. Really gives me a great feeling that you received something more than you expected when you first opened this poem. I thank you for sharing such wonderful comments. Bill -
Hi Grannyeri:
I am thrilled to get this kind of comment on my poem. To know you had a good feeling when you finished reading this, gave me a lot of gratification that I had written something your appreciated. Thank you for such lovely comments. Bill -
Hi LeftTurnAway:
Thank you for such kind words in your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this poem. Your comments are uplifting as well. Bill -
Hi CharoAgee:
This is the kind of response I hope for and am thrilled to get. Made my day. Thank you. Bill -
Hi Raynn:
I believe I have found the source and it is all in His book. I just keep reading and find even more. Thank you for such wonderful comments. Bill -
Hi more5600:
Yes and every time I read, I find even more. Thanks for your comment and insight. Bill -
Hi Recklessgrace:
I am very pleased that you enjoyed this one as well. It certainly does encourage me when I receive such wonderful feedback. Thank you.
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this was a very good write......you were right I did enjoy very much......Keep up the great work!!!! **reckless**
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Hi Viyanna:
You have returned all I could hope for in your comments. Thank you for such a beautiful comment. I really appreciate it. Bill -
A very peaceful, content tone in your write. This was a beautiful expression of your faith and future hopes. Well written and thanks for sharing.
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awwwe this is so beautiful! il ove the message its giving to everyone! ilove how religious it is.. i was not expecting that when i opened the page
but this is very wonderful! i love the rhyming and the flow! great write and best wishes!
casey-xx
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Enjoyed reading this uplifting verse, filled with rhyme and rhythm. Very easy to read and understand as well. Certainly gives a good feeling when done.
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very sweet poem, thank you for promoting it, it is definately uplifting
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Cool! It speaks to me! Saying more words than I can write down! I love the rhythm all that you've put into this. Keep writing. This is great! -
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If you ever find the truth about life, please pass it on to others as well.
I loved this poem. I loved the flow, the timing, the message, the feeling. I loved it all.
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Awe, this is very uplifting. This is indeed very thought provoking. Your love for G-d is in very word. Beautiful write and thank you so much for sharing!
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Looks like you already found what you're looking for.
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this is great. it is so very beautiful as it speaks of a love greater than i can imagine ever having. thank you for the beautiful picture which you drew me today. viyanna langager
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Angel of wolves says it all. this is beautiful.
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What a truly beautiful and awesomely written piece! It speaks volumes of your faith and love for the one who has given us life! What a blessing to read! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed week! ~Sandy~
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I really like the message behind this piece, i especially liked the ending..."Can lead in the end, to where we belong." nice job
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