Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Sat alone one afternoon
Under the pine tree
Where he could be free
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Was chasing a yellow balloon
It was floating too high
And he couldn’t fly
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Wanted to visit the moon
So in a rocket he flew
That was painted bright blue
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Listened to a lullaby tune
And he began to dream
Of raspberry ice cream
Ruffles the baby Raccoon
Author notes
I apoligise if this sounds more silly than cute but I thought I'd try something new, and I wanted to enter again.
By the time I'm finished you'll have more poems by me than anyone else. Anyway hope you like it, and more importantly I hope baby boy likes it.
Written January 31st, 2006
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A contest entry
- A Baby Book for Deshe (Contest) by SexyAngel0418.
300 points, ended February 9, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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it was like a sweet nursery rhyme but im not sure if you needed to end every stanza with that line except the last one, that was a good ending. It was enjoyable and really playful. Nice story told very cutesy, good poem.
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This was silly in a good way. It had a whimisical feel so necessary for a baby's poem. I also liked the style choice you made here.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, I did say it was different to my other two. Thank you for letting me enter so many times!
Good luck to you with the contest. -
This is so adorable!!! I really like this one!!! YOU did a great job!!! Thanks so much for entering this one and good luck!!!
Beth
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