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had enough

empty words written on the blank pages of life
i wonder why it hurts so bad, why do we live in strife.
the best isnt good enough,
you succeed but you still fail
we made it through the rain,
just to get stuck in hell.
smile for the camera
as they take a picture of
the girl who kept on trying,
but never got enough

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sometimes i just wanna give up...its hard, really hard
Written January 31st, 2006

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  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    April 19, 2006
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    Never give up. No one said life was easy and if they did that person isn't truly living. I can relate to you and this write all too well. So if ya need a friend to talk to you can reach me.

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows

  • Dull Red
    April 19, 2006
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    kewl


  • miny me
    April 17, 2006
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    I find life to be funny, but when it comes to society it's the grestset. Life isn't about failing it's about having the strenght to get and attempt the same thing from a different approach. those who never fail have never tried anything new.


  • KillMeNow89
    January 31, 2006
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    Sarah what is going through your mind? You can always im me or whatever if ya need me.
    Crystal

  • krimson30011
    January 31, 2006
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    This is a great write,
    shows plenty of emotion,
    keep the good work coming


  • strawberrie2005
    January 31, 2006
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    Sarah no u dont... but well done i loved it and so do i and lately i wont to more then ever and you kno why but ive made up my mind that no matter what im not giving up im stronger then that!

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