Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

It Is You


A symbol of respect, pride, and strength,
not to be ruffled, wadded, or soiled,
to be folded, unfurled, raised for all to see,
as in going into battle resounding victory.

Not to be tattered, torn, or burned in effigy,
rather a symbol of hope to those in bondage,
of hate for those who seek to enslave,
of patriotism to those who guard fiercely,
enshrined with those who died for liberty,
entrusted to each generation to decide its fate,
to be the most loved or most hated,
to be seen in every city, state, and on foreign soil,
wherever seen America is found.

No other symbol rises above or would be allowed,
representing freedom, recognized the world round,
a powerful adversary to an enemy
a gentle giant to those who are represented.

A symbol of red and white,
with fifty shining stars on a field of blue,
call it a flag,
in reality it is you.

Author notes

Option 1

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

1 - 21 of 21

  • atreyugurk
    May 28
    Edit | Reply
    Very powerful--an amazing amount of patrioticism here, I loooovvee it.
    -BON*BON

  • Very nice- I like how you really show your patriotism to your country. Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck.


  • BabyBun silver member
    January 11

    Edit | Reply

    America the Beautiful

    I admire the American people for their patriotism. I am so proud to be English, but here it is not the 'done thing' to be overt in one's support or raise a flag. I admire your passion, sir, you have inspired me to want to raise my own flag x


  • Ale E
    September 14, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This was very good indeed. VEry patriotic. I especially liked the background and picture. It really ties this together so well. Thank you for entering. I wish you the best of luck in my contest and in whatevery you do in life.

    aleXox- LIFE IS OUR REFLECTION...


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Bravo sir!

    Oh this is excellent, I would like to share this with your permission and credit of course. Well done sir, well done indeed!

  • Pietro789
    July 25, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent !

    This is a very good poem. Keep up the great work.


  • Sonja silver member
    July 22, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    It is always nice to be so proud of your country. Very strong and good represented.
    ~Sonja~


  • Glitter Goddess gold member
    July 10, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is beautiful writing. Quite powerful and lovely. Your patriotic thoughts are very strong but do not offend any other country, which I think is important. I think America needs more of its citizens to have (reasonable) nationalism. So many Americans undervalue their freedoms and privileges and then others are too narrow-minded in their national pride. This was a beautiful tribute to American and the American flag. I think it would make a great Fourth of July appreciation poem. Thank you for your entry. Good luck in my contest.
    - Andi


  • mjayyyyy
    July 2, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    thank you for this. i appreciate you taking time to write about our country, and defend it even. nice write.
  • JoRoDo 11 22
    June 25, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    great write!! nice choice in words- I certainly admire your nationalism. I'm the type of person who has a lot of spirit and you nailed this poem.
    I especially liked the lines
    "of patriotism to those who guard fiercely,
    enshrined with those who died for liberty,
    entrusted to each generation to decide its fate"
    those lines were very powerful. anyway great job! good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!

  • Sandal
    June 14, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Every line shows pride in your national symbol, and calls for a return to the ideals which made America great. Great emotive writing! Best of luck.


  • meanderingbear gold member
    March 11, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Very Nice!

    Our youngest son recently left the military to work in the private sector. He would especially enjoy this poem. Nice sentiments....if only more people would respect our flag and take pride in our country!


  • joyya
    March 6, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    I like this a lot, as you know. Thank you for entering.

  • DawnBaby gold member
    February 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Excellent!

    I very much felt this way, until the last election and Bush has taken too much respect away from our country. Hate to get political, but...we all grew up feeling this way about the flag, I pray soon I will feel that way once again. I especially enjoyed the last sentence. It is true. Excellent piece of writing Mac!


  • joyya
    February 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Salute!

    My son is in the army. He would appreciate this poem. I agree with all you wrote. Enjoyed this a lot.


  • Snappy - Doodles gold member
    February 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Splendid Write

    An inspiring message that is beautifully quoted. It is an incredible piece of poetry. It has quality and character with a beautiful smooth flow. Very pleasant read. Lovely write.

    ~Snappy~


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 21, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    i have not read such a touching poem in such a long time. this is beautiful and touching. makes one feel proud. you have done a very amazing job on this wonderful write of your. i don't know you at all, but i am very proud of you for writing such remarkable words. may God bless you and yours.

  • sarahbethb17
    May 21, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    A wonderfully worded poem about our nation's flag...I love the last line, it really makes you think.
    Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed it.
    Take care and God bless!
    Sarah Beth

  • Be-Gentle
    May 21, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    Patriotic

    I love it alot..it touches alot of hearts at this time in our country's time at unrest...I hope this becomes one for the history books...
  • Cappucine C
    May 21, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    A-

    This is a very well written poem about the American flag.

    Personally, I've been questioning how people see America since the whole Middle-East-War-On-Terror campaign. I'm not so crazy about politics, but I think what America is doing is crossing a lot of boundaries. Benjamin Franklin once said something like, "He who is willing to trade Liberty for Safety deserves neither Liberty nor Safety." (My history teacher = pro-nonviolence.)

    I think what's happening right now is a disgrace, and I honestly hope to be able to get away from here, because our government right now is so corrupt that I feel sick just thinking about it.

    Kudos for you poem!

    Bekca.
1 - 21 of 21