He opens his eyes at the early dawn
And whispers a prayer to the bright blue sky
Wishing for a lost love long gone.
He hadn't known that his girl was to die,
he thought in silence as he looked above,
so he regrets as in bed he does lie.
He should have been there when push came to shove,
but now she was lost and he took his life,
'Cause his girl had gone in the name of love.
It was done with one swift stroke of a knife.
He hoped he would be with his girl again,
And end his eternal heartache and strife.
Author notes
Terza Rima.
aba bcb cdc ded...
Pretty much, the shorest Romeo and Juliet story ever to live.
Written January 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- I Want Rhymes!!!!!!!!! by Lost-Pearls.
307 points, ended February 1, 2006, 10 entries
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Hey its good. I really like it, awesome job!!!!
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Thank yous so much for having participated in my contest. I greatly apreciate it. You're a very talented writer, and 'm telling you this with all honesty
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Great!
A very well done piece sweetie, thanks for reading mine as well, I once again must say, it's so good to see your words, love reading your sweet soul, always know, you have a friend in me, no, I'm not buzz lightyear, LOL!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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Great write. Thanks for entering and good luck
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I like it... but how depressing ._.;;
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