Why did you go you broke my heart
I can't stand it when we're apart
Why was I the last one to know
You broke my heart why did you go
You said you'd stay forevermore
With years of bliss for us in store
Nothing could make you go away
Forevermore you said you'd stay
Alone I be so sad so blue
Without you don't know what to do
No euphoria no ecstasy
So sad so blue alone I be
Is there a chance will you come back
So once again we'll be on track
To resume our gorgeous romance
Will you come back is there a chance.
Author notes
Written January 30th, 2006.
This is fantasy.I've been happily married for 58 years.
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Simply Wonderful
I love the layout of the poem. The way you wrote it really stood out to me and the emotions that are contained in the words are simply breathtaking. I bid you, very good write. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you. -
RULES, RULES, RULES
DEAR POET,
THANK YOU FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST
SWEET REVENGE WITH YOUR SUBMISSION"wHY DID
YOU GO"
pLEASE RETURN TO THE RULES. THERE YOU WILL NOTE THAT THERE IS REQUIRED SOMETHING TO
BE PLACED IN AUTHOR NOTES.
ONCE YOU HAVE DONE SO, PLEASE CONTACT ME
AND I"LL BE PLEASED TO ENTER YOUR POEM INTO
MY CONTEST AND READ IT AND COMMENT
UNTIL THEN
WISHING YOU GOOD LUCK IN MY CONTEST
BEST REGARDS,K
LIQUID
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Beautiful write, good luck in my contest and thanks for entering.
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Its great to be able to write about things like luv and being hurt i hope u show them this poem, maybe they will come back and your romance will once again live
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BEAUTIFUL
this is so awesomely beautiful and sad at the same time. someone sure is loved. did you give them a copy? it is certainly bound to win their heart back. it is absolutely beautiful. the only thing i suggestion i have is that you fix the spelling errors in this line: Alone I be ao aad so blue. keep up the great work and i am looking forward to reading more from you. viyanna langager -
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A great poem minus the few spelling errors that can be fixed.
I love the beginning line of your poem BillBard:
Why did you go, you broke my heart. Well done for a great effort and good luck
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