it was a normal day
insignificantly ordinary
i stopped, just for a drink of water
then, so fast his hands came down
around my face
over my mouth
he dragged me into the lockeroom
pushing me onto the floor
the day was over
no one was going to save me
they gaged me
and stretched me out full length onto the floor
arms raised above my head
one held my ankles another my wrists
they looked at each other
coming to their final disision
the leader
the one who had taken me in
slowly reached for my jeans zipper
with painful slowness
he striped me bare
i couldn't move
they all stood
staring down in wonder and anticipation
the leader sank to his knees
looking me over
mounting my pelvis
undoing his zipper...
he was rough
and uncaring
the others excited,egg him on
he finally emerges
sweaty and exhilarated
i push back the tears of humiliation
it was only the beginning
the others followed
mounting me
the touched me everywhere
nothing was sacred
it was finally over
i took in deep breaths of air
the leader he drags me to the shower
binding my hands and feet
he washes me hes not leaving a trace
he washes me slowly enjoying himself
taking me out he dresses me
none to gently
i cry
he sees and slaps me
he was the football captain
untouchable
impervious to harm
he knew and so did i
he smiled and leaned close to my ear
and whispered
there's not a damn thing you can do about it
Author notes
Written January 30th, 2006
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die
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! kill them all! they deserve to die...all of them! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! burn them slowly as they scream and their penises begin to shrivel!
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omg, i feel the need to say sorry? just for the fact that their are bastards like them in the world, i feel ashamed for everyone of them, im disgraced by just breathing the same air as them. like everyone else im hoping this is fiction! its a greta write, despite the heartwrenching topic, i love it x0x
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So sad.... So horrible...
Oh, man... wow... This was so... blunt and raw. Full of emotion, pain, and... just wow. I don't know what to say.
I'm so sorry. I'm totally in awe. Surprised thoroughly with the poem and the situation.
It's scary how the day before, you would've never expected something like this. You would've never guessed. And then BOOM it happens, and it's with you forever.... Life scares me all the time.
That's just cruel... Just plain cruel. Heartless.
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whoa! holy shit i am really sorry if this happened to you.
great poem. it has great detail and it rams home the pain.
keep up the good work.
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THIS POEM TOUCHED ME. I HOPE THAT THIS HAS NEVER HAPPENED TO YOU. IF IT DID I AM SO SORRY THAT YOU HAD TO LIVE THROUGH SUCH A HORRIBLE EXPERIENCE, IF NOT WHAT AN IMAGINATION! THE WAY YOU CAN IMERSE YOURSELF IN THE CHARACTER ,BRINGING FORTH SUCH FEELING AND EMOTION. VERY GOOD .
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i dont know what to say..but i know how you feel. i didn't go through the same exact thing but i know how it feels emotionally to be taken advantage of and all that. i like this because it's real and it's raw.
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excellent and heart felt great work
oh my this is terrible fiction or not this is awful great poem i mean the detail excellent but wow jam to the floor wow -
i was meaning to put that this is fiction i really dont know where i get the inspiration
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well written I also hope that it is fiction, sorry for u if it itsnt thats terrible!
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shocking
wow im shocked i can only hope that this is fiction?
if you would like to talk im here xxx Nina
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