I have a Princess from a land, faraway over the sea,
She is elegant and appealing, as only a Princess can be.
Mysterious brown eyes shine, like pools dark and deep,
Are the last things that I see, when I lay down to sleep.
Her endearing face is framed, by soft black shiny hair,
The vision she gives, makes people pause, even stare.
Her smile is like sunbeams, with neat pearly white teeth,
And garments concealing a slim body, there underneath.
She is graceful and happy with strict God loving ways,
And I'll treasure our Friendship, for the rest of my days.
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Written January 30th, 2006
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Fine Poetry
You honor Shahrzad with your beautiful poems about her.
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Now I confess I’m enjoying these beautiful and sweet poems for my sista! I agree with Shahrzad. You’re really a wonderful dad! And I know Shahrzad, too, and she does deserve such magnificent poems from you!
Thank you for sharing with us
~Vernal Bloom~
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Thank you Bret, I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.
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Again your words are beautiful, Another brilliant piece ~Bret~
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The mind boggles .... I have few daughters coming on line too ... A harem would have been worth looking at .... but I am not a masochist !!!
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Bazza.. you certainly have a wonderful daughter, I am thrilled to have her as my niece..oh! hey does that make you my brother/
I hope so! lol a growing family is so neat! welcome..to the charmer..moonlite family as well..
Love sis/ inlaw?
lol
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Awwwwww!!! This is so beautiful!!
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Shahrzad acts as royalty should. She is a kind princess-like person with a beautiful soul and personality. You used imagery in this piece and honored your AP daughter with such words that any daughter would cherish from her father. I think that Shahrzad enjoyed reading this piece, and that it was a wonderful surprise for her. You have done a great job with this unforced rhyming scheme. May your works continue to flourish and may the best be with you!
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Lovely Poem
This poem honors Shahrzad, a lovely poem for a lovely person. -
Aww! This is soo sweet! And by the sounds of it Shahrzad likes it!
Once again a brilliant write by you! 
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Hi, Bazza! You're right, Shahrzad is truely a princess, atleast in her soul, as she has an almost royal way of charming people with her wonderful person! Your poem is great, and I love the rhymes, and the picture you paint with your wonderful words! I applaud you, Bazza!
Jim
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What a wonderful way to honor an a AP daughter.I think she will really like this piece of poem devoted to her.
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Thanks a lot dear daddy.Now it looks like me.
You're a wonderful daddy;writing for me beautiful poems.I'm so proud of you.
Shahrzad
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Well as it was a surprise for you and I did not know if it was OK to show your full face so I drew the veil and removed the glasses. That's all. I have replaced it with your original photo. Sorry it upset you.
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This is a lovely piece dear daddy,but I don't get what has happened to my photo here.
I don't wear any face mask daddy!!!
Shahrzad
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Thank you and yes !! It was nicely put and appreciated as well. Well it wouldn't take long to do her portrait would it ??lol.
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Thank you for the comment and yes I am lucky to have her as a daughte andshe certainly is a Princess in my eyes, and that is all that matters. Thanks Joan.
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Dear Barry, You are very blessed to have an AP Daughter and she's a princess too? Beautifully written my Friend.
Hugs Joan
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wow. that's all i can really say. this is really odd, yet beautiful in an....odd way.
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