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A Little Note


Hey Baby,

This is just a little note
to let you know that I love you
Im glad that you are my husband
I cant write much im already late for work
when I wake up in the morning I
relize that it wasnt a dream after all
at night I pray that when I wake up
that you'll be lying next to me
well I have to go just thought
I would write you

A little note

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Written January 30th, 2006

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  • Darkbabe
    January 30, 2006
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    OMG you get to come to tennesse with me. Yah! we are gonna leave friday and got up there and then stay the night in a motel and o we are going to go site seeing too and then saterday we have to be up there at like 11:30 and then we leave there about 5 or 6 im not for sure lol and then we stay that night there again and then sunday we go home lol be sure to pack everything we are going to be like..yah and we are going to take lots of camaras too and anyways i was gonna take mikie but he cant go but anyways i cant wait yah stay with us thrusday cause umm we will be leaving early friday morning. My voice is still kinda messed up but i need to practice lol my flu is going away. I hope and pray lol.

  • Darkbabe
    January 30, 2006
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    Hey this is really good. Good job.

  • -Crzyme-
    January 30, 2006
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    Thanks


  • Lionslove silver member
    January 30, 2006
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    shortwordschallengebutnicefforthere-see talen

    change bg color or font color, sweetie....hard to see. the subject matter of poem is confusing to me (which doesn't happen that often to me - so...congratulations), is it wanting, wishing, dreaming, desire, sad longing...i thought for a moment there, ..it WAS a REAL note!...so, you did something very cool here....keep writing. you've got talent! atb,dl4u(nocurtaincall)