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Repeat After Me


Double dutch
Double trouble
Bazooka gum
Double bubble

Happy birthdays
Happy ever after
Make me smile
Happy laughter

Last hurrah
Last dance
Nights ending
Last chance

Gravy boat
Gravy train
Drip drip drip
Gravy stain

Cell block
Cell phone
Mirror image
Cell clone

Red red rose
Red red lips
Polished nails
Red fingertips

Golden ring
Golden pear
Sun streaks
Golden hair

Gods blessing
Gods true love
Reaching for
Gods up above


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Written January 30th, 2006

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  • Slick99
    August 28, 2008

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    this is a spectacular poem!!! i bet it was hard to write one like this!!! keep up the good work!!! -slick99


  • Bungalow Bill
    February 3, 2006
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    Very spirited and positive without being too overbearing or preaching to the reader. I enjoyed it very much


  • Stardust100
    January 31, 2006
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    great poem love the lay out it all really excellent cute writing

  • Linda Sue silver member
    January 30, 2006
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    You did have this listed in the humor category...but I see you changed it. Now I'll have to change my comment. God Bless. Love, Linny


  • Sandygram
    January 30, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thanks Legend. I like to just write silly things once in a while that don't make sense. Thanks for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy


  • Legend silver member
    January 30, 2006
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    great Job Sandy I love poems that just take off and wander where they will. They make for wonderful exciting reading Never knowing where they will end up.A pleasure to read this crazy mind is now on a high Thank you

  • Sandygram
    January 30, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Thanks for the comment. Well I think God has a sence of humor too. It wasn't meant to be a really humorous poem , just a poem of repeating words. Take care and God Bless. Love Sandy

  • Linda Sue silver member
    January 30, 2006
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    Hi Sis, This is really cute and very clever. Just perfect. I like the 4th stanza;

    Gravy boat
    Gravy train
    Drip drip drip
    Gravy stain

    Great job! ~ Love, Linny
    Edited on Jan 30, 4:22 p.m. because ''.

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