Double dutch
Double trouble
Bazooka gum
Double bubble
Happy birthdays
Happy ever after
Make me smile
Happy laughter
Last hurrah
Last dance
Nights ending
Last chance
Gravy boat
Gravy train
Drip drip drip
Gravy stain
Cell block
Cell phone
Mirror image
Cell clone
Red red rose
Red red lips
Polished nails
Red fingertips
Golden ring
Golden pear
Sun streaks
Golden hair
Gods blessing
Gods true love
Reaching for
Gods up above
Author notes
Written January 30th, 2006
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this is a spectacular poem!!! i bet it was hard to write one like this!!! keep up the good work!!! -slick99
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Very spirited and positive without being too overbearing or preaching to the reader. I enjoyed it very much
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great poem love the lay out it all really excellent cute writing
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You did have this listed in the humor category...but I see you changed it. Now I'll have to change my comment. God Bless. Love, Linny
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
Thanks Legend. I like to just write silly things once in a while that don't make sense.
Thanks for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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great Job Sandy I love poems that just take off and wander where they will. They make for wonderful exciting reading Never knowing where they will end up.A pleasure to read this crazy mind is now on a high Thank you
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WONDERFUL POEM
Thanks for the comment. Well I think God has a sence of humor too. It wasn't meant to be a really humorous poem , just a poem of repeating words. Take care and God Bless. Love Sandy
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Hi Sis, This is really cute and very clever. Just perfect. I like the 4th stanza;
Gravy boat
Gravy train
Drip drip drip
Gravy stain
Great job! ~ Love, Linny
Edited on Jan 30, 4:22 p.m. because ''.
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