What can I say?
I am no competetion against any girl...
If he falls for another girl,
there's no use in fighting
I would only fail...
there's nothing I have
I can only let him go
and feel my heart ripping apart
I would just have to walk it off
and tell myself laughing
"Could I be any more stupid?
What's wrong with me?
Why do I fall so fast?
Stop this nonsense!
I will be alone!
Don't keep throwing yourself
at things like this!"
and yet....
I would still be crying to myself
because of the peircing pain
in my heart
that was stabbed by the knife in his hands...
the knife he used to tell me
that I meant nothing to him...
what could I do?
I can't replace the girl
which is what his dreams are made of..
all I can say is...
I'm sorry
I'm sorry that I ever fell,
I'm sorry that I couldn't be that
one girl to make you happy...
I'm sorry I couldn't make you give any feelings back...
I'm sorry you ever met me...
and I'm sorry I ever met you...
I'm sorry...
that I was a waste of your time....
forgive me....
oh set me free from these bondages of pain...
I'm not asking for anything
but for you to leave me alone...
forget me...
forget I ever exsisted...
and I will with all my might...
forget you...
good luck with her...
I know she'll make you happier than
I ever will....
goodbye
Author notes
Written January 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Pain!!! by Broken Angel E.
300 points, ended February 23, 2006, 68 entries
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so much denial...why?
I have to ask...why do you put your self down so?
It sort of hurts one to know another is going through such denial.......best of luck to you in life.....Here's hoping you feel better.
ps)don't let any one else tell you you're no good.
every girl's worth something and everything. -
Dude thats just what i wanna say well done i know what you mean... well written and i have some poems if u would like to take the time to read them... but yeah last week my bf and me broke up and thats actually what i wanted to say well done i loved it... thanks for writing it... good luck in the contest!
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holy shit dude...aside from this being a rlly good poem...once again are you doin ok?? i hope everythings all right, but if not, ill be there to listen if need be...anyways...this was a rlly good poem...i liked it alot...it was very full of emotion and quiet moving...i hope your okay dude!!!
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