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Free Me...

I look at my wrist and i only wish
I only wish i could cut again
Release it all
Let it all run out and free me from this pain
I look to my left and i see your picture smiling at me
and i only wish
I only wish i could be in your arms again
Release it all
Let it all run out and free me from this pain

Author notes

a work in progress... story behide poem... My fiance is in the Army. He is training in VA and i live in Ohio so we dont get to see eachother at like all. This poem is about just how i have really lonily days and i use to cut then i just started to talk to tyler but now that he is gone and i dont have anyone else to talk to i dont know what to do. I dont really do it anymore because i think of tyler. he is my saving grace and i am his.
Written January 30th, 2006

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  • LordVampirEternal
    May 14, 2006
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    beautiful but could have been GREAT

    i wish i could give you a btter comment i mean it was beautifully written and very well done and its not that its sad sad can be good but im not big on the whole cutting to release thing but was beautifullt written a better topic and this would be tremendous


  • blahlah80
    February 2, 2006
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    we didnt brake up. he is training in VA for the army and i live in ohio. the distance is what i am talking about.


  • Aligirl1155
    January 30, 2006
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    Excellent

    You dont have to cut to bear your pain, there are other ways, yeah some days i wish i could go back and continue to cut, make a promise to someone close, make your writing come alive with your pain, and sadnees and tears. it helps becuase instead of showing the marks you can say your poems. I have writen some good crap when i cutting, yeah i took up other hobbies to keep my self away. but yet the scares will be there no matter what. it is okay. there are people here for you. And yet a brake up might not be easy, cause you have memories, picture and all but yet. You can keep them in your heart, but yet ask your self why did i get rid of them or why did they get rid of me. and tell them that no matter what, you will still care for them but that is all. the pain will go away. soon enough just encourage friends and family not to say the name of the person that you want to forget, and move on. it works and it will help. but know if you need someone i am here to talk to you. a lending hand that dont cost anything.

  • Aliensnow
    January 30, 2006
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    hope u get better