Trapped
stuck, enclosed, confined
Don't know how you got here,
can't stop and press rewind.
Lost
bewildered, bemused, misplaced
Lost in a jungle,
of all things defaced.
Alone
forgotten, left, ignored
Thinking of that fateful night,
when all your blood was poured.
Angry
irate, spiteful, mad
Exploded worse,
then you ever had.
Hurt
sad, wounded, upset
You knew that all this endearment,
could only end in regret.
Injured
wounded, bloody, hurt
You can feel the pain you've endured,
as you're lying in the dirt.
Helpless
vulnerable, exposed, bare
You're suddenly scared,
when will someone care.
Dead
cold, passed-on, expired
Now gone is the life of an angel,
a life which by most was desired
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Written January 30th, 2006
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this is great ali i love it, who is it about though? hopefully nobody, just an inspired write
hmm keep up the good work love ya lots -
I have been writing quite a few years,, I am a youth but I do understand that sometimes.. simple text conveys a better emotion or message..and I wouldn't call myself a novice.
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In reply to comments.. I have been writing quite a few years,,
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powerful words,
striking swift and deep
talent radiates from your key strokes, love
keep penning
<3 travisty -
wow!!!! peoper good piece of writing. well good read
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Mind boggeling
Wow, I like it how you say something for each main emotion but you write it so it glides through your mind! Just a quick question How long have you been writing for? -
deep
wow.. very moving i like the way uve described each of the emotions... this is a really good write -
original
This was very deep and I love the way you wrote it. I found it original! Nice write!
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