We've been through the good times,
we've struggled through the bad.
You're always there for me,
even when I'm lonely and sad.
Our love grew from the moment we met,
I remember your kiss at the rink.
If it's true that only fools rush in,
then we are fools who stay in sync.
You always listen to my woes,
and calm my pain and tears.
You hold me in sweet serenity
when you kiss away my fears.
Your joyful face keeps me smiling,
your deep brown eyes draw me in.
Your hair, I can run my fingers through it,
and when we're alone, I feel like sin.
I love to caress your face,
your arms, your back, your chest.
And whenever I feel like I'm not pretty,
you say things that make me feel my best.
No matter what the cost,
we always stand up for the other.
Our love flows smoothly on its course,
and I know we'll last forever.
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Written January 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- PAY IT FORWARD....again by Thedragonisgone.
300 points, ended October 30, 2006, 59 entries
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Sweet and sincere, my dear. Just a lovely poem and it feels so young and free. The hope is brimming over like a sparkling sea. Thank you so much for entering into the contest.
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Nice sentiments here, it's not unlike a poem I wrote called "My Special Valentine" I think it could flow better, you may need to omit or change a few words in places. For instance you could say "and I know we'll last forever" in the last line and "no matter what the cost" may scan better in the first line of that verse. See what you think.
Ann -
very sweet, tho some things seem to kill the flow, its not a bad work
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i like this poem and yes it did and thank you for your comment. if you liked that one you should read the daugher. Amber
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so sweet, great job! its beautifully written and i love the little rhymes in there...thank you for sharing this with us all, and thank you for making me smile this morning ^_^
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awwwwwww so sweet! I feel the heartfelt words you have penned here! Good luck and Happy Valentine's Day!!...Lynda
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