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Plastic

This person you see isn't me
can't you see? it's only plastic
i wear a fake smile, looking happy
can't you see? it's only plastic
you think I'm happy, chipper, fine
it's all an act, i tell you, all an act
none of that is real. it's all fake
why can't you see it? look at my face
see through my mask. uncover the truth
i know you can, but open your eyes
your eyes are closed and so is your mind
you can't see me when I'm in front of you
you're blind and can't see the obvious
you're deaf and can't hear my crying
you're numb and can't feel me shaking you
instead, all you see is plastic
i gave you plenty of clues to find me
but no, you ignored them all
almost like you knew they were there
but chose to not take them at all
now i get it. you do know I'm there
you can see me, hear me, feel me
this whole time, you knew this
so, why didn't you tell me?
you wanted what you wanted
you got what you got
an original is covered by plastic
this lost belongs to you
instead of having someone special
unique compared to others
you just bought a copy
a cheap one, i might add too
in your eyes, I'm a rare treasure
too bad I'm just fool's gold in real life
you wasted what you had to get gold,
when all you got was plastic

Author notes

this is my first time doing, free verse? idk. i got the idea from "mean girls", but different concept
Written January 29th, 2006

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  • SleepinBeauty
    April 26, 2006
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    very good

    Who are you sending this message to I wonder? Someone you like or your friends around you. Most people worry about their problems not others' problems, and we deffinatly don't try and help make their life better or try to understand your problem. It's the same with odd or annoying personality traits. We notice others annoying habits or quirks, and yet we can't understand that we do the same things we complain about to our girlfriends.