you hear about it but you
don't see
whats happening to me
see the scars
along my arms
hear the crys
my eyes
have teared
no one can help this
not even me
I try to speak
but the words don't come out
I try to breathe
but I just can't
my floor is filled with blood
from all these cuts
I try to hide them
but through these selves they
just bleed through
no one can help me
not even you
you try and try
but can't you just fail
like everyone else
~Emily
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Written January 29th, 2006
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wow this is a good poem. u expressed wat u r feeling very well. keep it up
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thanxz well one person said it was dumb but idk
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aw good job!
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This poem was really cool i think it had alotta meaning
keep it up sweetie
love mel
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Hmm I'm not sure i really liked this piece. It lacked punctuation and some grammar and reading it was quite difficult. It seemed a bit choppy and cliche. Maybe you could add something to it or something.
But just my opinion.
Good job nonetheless.
♥anna
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