Your eyes so deep and dark
Pools of pain that touch my heart.
Through these holes I see your soul
And I am blinded forever more.
Your lips so soft and sweet
Taste delicious, enough to eat.
Through these caresses I feel the pleasure
And I am lost in your kiss forever.
Your love so intense and hot waves
Of passion that ignites a spark through these flames.
I feel the heat and I am consumed by fire completely.
Author notes
This is not my poem.. but a poem that my gf wrote to me. We split up for about 6 months because she wanted to date someone else. It hurt me deeply and she knows that now.. and this is the result of that. So credit for this poem should be to her, not myself.
Written January 29th, 2006
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Well, credit to your gf then, this is a beautifull poem! you can taste the passion inside it, I wish you two the best of luck if you are together now...Well done to you...or her, either way it's a wonderfull poem ^_^
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