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Truth

Wailing in a malicious kindred of views
While people around have their beam
As I wait for news
I ask that you look into the era of ways that seam
To push the door a little more
To see more than before
Hold your breathe in the benevolence
Stand stiff as stone in awe
Reach out to touch the scene
Then choke in your realization, that it was a dream.

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Written January 29th, 2006

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  • John Ratliff
    January 29, 2006
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    the era of today is in a corrupt form of ignorance without innocence. everything these days have gone down hill, government, economy, and especially music. the generation that "pushed the door" is over, they have evolved into their world. If that is in fact what you meant, you caught it very nicely and i enjoyed it. Thank you. if thats not what you meant i still enjoyed it and it made me think.


  • Hot goth 101
    January 29, 2006
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    wow i hate when that stuff happens! i have a poem called "in the middle of the night" its like this.