They see the smiles on her lips
the laughter adorning her youthful face
her newfound giggles
but they're so oblivious
They think she's stopped
but the truth is
she just learned
she taught herself to cover up
She doesn't want them knowing
she doesn't want to go back there
she doesn't want them to be ashamed
she cant even tell her best friend the truth
Cause she just smiles
giggles and pulls a joke
she runs across the halls
hand in hand with her friends
They're so oblivious
she hasn't changed
she hasn't gotten better
she got worse in fact
She just learned how to be deceiving
how to trick the ones closest to her
into believing she was all better
into believing she was perfectly f.i.n.e
Author notes
Written January 29th, 2006
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wow this is a great write!! explains soo much n i can relate to it in so many wayz! take care!
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:-) yea ill try not to give up
thanks for reading
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wow hun thank you so much. im glad i could make your day :-)
take care <333 -
wow i love this..it sounds like me a lil bit..but anyways u did a great job..and like kristen said..never give up on anything...keep it up!
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I love this. Seriously.. it goes along.. wtih exactly how I feel.. what im going through.
And you made my day.. because you actually realized.
Wow.
This is crazy.
Never give up.
On anything.
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aw, thank you. so much. glad to be back. lol but i ever since this, ive had writers block. but i think im about to break through
<3 Kiersten -
Wonderful
Hun.... this was soooo good... n so damn true to life.... its great truely a piece of art!...im so happy to read your work again glad to see u back... Great write!!!! no joke!
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Aly -
aw, hun. im sorry that you relate to this. i mean, its good to know im not alone, but i wouldnt wish the feeling on anyone.
Thanks for the comment and applause.
take care k?
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This sounds exactly as though you wrote it about me I love it and can really relate... Great write keep it up
~*~kate~*~ -
hey babe what is this about?
I love you with all my heart!
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oh, thank you so much. and thank you for the suggestions. Take care
~Kiersten~
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veladropadasto,
dont why, but i always end up thinking that ur a boy, and then i have to remind myself that ur a charming lady...
beautiful fact uncovered, beautiful emotion bestowed..excellent thinking..u remind me of rabindranath tagore..
yet..maybe u could have done a notch more on ur structure..but maybe...afterall i could be wrong...but the topic u have sellected and the merits for its prsentation overule all flaws for me...just cant stop admiring ye..
keep up the superb action of your grey cells..
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Thanks so much sweetie. Im glad you liked it, yea. i think about it more than do it, but i wish i could make it stop, make the wanting to stop. dont you?
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wow, this is so wonderful. i can realte in almost every word you speak. i havent done it though, but besides that i want to and i havent changed. im having better days but nothing can ever make me stop thinking about it i dont think. this was wonderful.
Allie -
Aw, thanks sweetie. I appreciate it. I havent written in a while, so i couldnt tell if this was good or not. lol.
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oh, thank you so much. Yea that was what i was trying to do, trying to write it from a perspective that everyone could relate to.
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Wow I can totally relate...like totally... this one really got to me.. Hit me deep. Great write hun, I think you are super talented!
Cassandra -
Wow. I have to say, this poem is very touching to me. I can really feel like I am her, when reading this. Very good.
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