Deep sapphire eyes full of innocence and hope,
Blinking tenderly between intrigued stares,
Vibrant shapes sway with lullaby chimes,
Yellow stars, blue cars, red teddy bears.
Tiring eyelids stirred by a familiar touch,
Fatherly embrace softened by love and joy,
Pounding beat reminds of early days,
Welcome to the world angelic, baby boy.
Author notes
Written January 29th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- A Baby Book for Deshe (Contest) by SexyAngel0418.
300 points, ended February 9, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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its very sweet and a really nice poem. Good job.
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How precious this write is, so much emotion and tenderness packed into so few lines. I really enjoyed the sensory images you provided and your use of adjectives.
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Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure if I'll write another just yet. We'll have to see how I feel before the contest ends...
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WOW... This one is really sweet!!! Thank you for entering and good luck... I'll be looking for more entries from you!!!
Beth
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