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Long Night





Through the redness of frustration,


the blue in your eyes


looks more beautiful


than ever




before.

























                           


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Written January 29th, 2006

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  • AMEgirly
    April 2, 2006
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    awww this is soo sweet. short but yet it means alot! keep up the awesome work!


  • Cowgirl062388
    February 1, 2006
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    is this about *him*... ooooo cute. I LOVE THIS!!! andI love you.. this is very good, simple and to the point! I LOVE YOU

    ~Lezli

  • jlarson
    January 30, 2006
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    i really liked this because i know you've gone through a lot of frustration with how your relationship is going, but you know how wonderful he is. i'm so happy that you have him in your life because he's so fricken sweet! i love you soooo much!!! great write!! great job!!!


  • Mr Commander
    January 30, 2006
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    Short and sweet. Good job!