My heart twisting
in a swirl of passion,
lust, come join me
sweet moon
let our bodies run under
the light of the moon
let my lips caress yours
let my scent be imprinted in yours
let my hand get lost within your hair
let my soul become one with yours
let me run free
with you by me side on the night air
Let me tell you a secret
that will drain the color of your face
le me show you my second skin
let your heart beat within
Let me take you to the forest paths
Savor the pungent smell of our furs
Let me leave my kill before you
as an offering to the night
Let my azure eyes hold you
in a intense kiss of tongues and lips
let my arms behold you
as your love embraces my hips
Oh, let me do so many things
for my blood sings
to have you by my side
as we travel by the moonlight
following the Forrest paths
And in the bliss of the night
hold me
wolf
hold me,
hold me
to your side
Author notes
mmm, although it is not erotica it is very sensual...
Inspired by the novel
Blood and Chocolate
Written January 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- ONE OR TWO OR THREE FOR THE LADIES(extended edition :) ) by tarcus.
555 points, ended July 10, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Back N Black by Poetic Obscenity.
550 points, ended July 15, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LETS MAKE LOVE HERE by Swan song.
480 points, ended August 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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It's two different options
For sure. Though you've done this wonderfully. Though, there's a few mispellings and grammatical errors that take away your "Flawless" appeal.
It's great and loving. Great imagery.
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Thank you for our comment! I greatly appreciate the input, I'll be sure to correct it. Thanks
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Only trying to help. You're welcome.
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I wonder if you live in the woods or do you just like animals better than humans?
The descriptive nature of this work is facinating one can almost feel the hot breathe of the wolve as she adorns herself for her mate.
(let me show you my second skin
let your heart beat within)
this was just fantastic whether meant or not as ametaphor for the female form,
well done indeed.
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Thank you very much for the comment and the honorable mention! I'm a very honored
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