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Look at You

Hay you there!
In the electronic void.
Drifting with us multitudes.
Trying to find sugar.
Feeding the world shit.
Trying to play God.
To be their savior.
We the helpless babies,
Who suckle and whine,
Hoping for an ear,
A tear.

Oh, the bright darkness
Of you.

To be touched.
Held.
looked upon.
And to know that you
Are more than just a seed.

Look at you!
With out flesh!
You come to me for love.
As do I come to you.




Author notes

If you read this: I was having a moment where I was pondering my existance. lol
Written January 28th, 2006

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  • Farzana Moon
    July 31, 2006
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    excellento

    great, powerful imagery! touching and profound.