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Down the street, after school.

Not so very long ago,
not so very far away
I looked upon your smiling face
as you walked beside me
down the street, after school.

Seven weeks ago and counting
I looked upon the face of an acquaintance
a guy I never thought of as more than a friend
and wanted more as I walked with you
down the street, after school.

Every day since
hoping to run into you
by chance, by fate, or by accident,
mostly ending up by myself, I walked
down the street, after school.

My journal can't tell a lie
about every day I've thought of you
every day for seven weeks
since that first look as I walked with you
down the street, after school.

I'll always remember that day,
not so very long ago
not so very far away
when I walked home with you
for the first time
down the street, after school

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I hope you aren't someone who doesn't like repition, i hope you like this. it is about a guy I like.
Written December 6th, 2002

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  • -Christine-
    November 16, 2003
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    I have nothing more to say than that this was an extremely good write and reading made me feel happy for you inside. I hope that you remembering that day will bring back happy memories, not cruel love who would never let it be. I am sure that you would always look upon that day with joy, because how much better could a day get, than to realize your feelings for someone?!


  • Joel E. Beezley Jr.
    October 29, 2003
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    *sighs* ahhhhhhhhhhhh........LOVE!!!

    I love it! DUDE, I LOVE your style! I love reminicsing (or however you spell it) of old loves, my love, Corley, and of loves (iff any others) yet to come..

  • firestar
    December 12, 2002
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    really enjoyed;made me think of 4th grade and pieces of paper that said circle yes or no.of whispering in friends ears about cute boys and oogaling with wide-eyed attetion.lovely write.

    blessings,
    firestar


  • silentspeaker
    December 11, 2002
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    made me think about the first time i had a crush... of course it was in like 1st grade, and it was on my bestfriends older brother... who was in 3rd grade, and who happened to be my next door neighbor...

    ~Vicky~


  • Blondita
    December 11, 2002
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    I liked this...lovely xx

  • NoNamePoet
    December 6, 2002
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    aww this was so sweet! It made me smile!!!

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