All I feel is your Love
all I want is help
everyday is heart warming
minutes pass I try to say
I LOVE YOU every time were
together brings a piece of
life to me as were together
more I am successful and recovered
I just hope our love will stay true
and you can stay with me
Our Love is at risk
Family members hate me or you.
Risk everything to be with you
Use our friends as escape goats to
talk to each other
We take risk, we can be sure our love is
TRUE
Author notes
LOVE BITES HONESTLY
Written January 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended July 17, 2007, 36 entries
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minutes pass I try to say
I LOVE YOU every time were
together brings a piece of
life to me as were together
more I am successful and recovered
I just hope our love will stay true
good job on those lines i wish you the best of luck int he contes -
It does honey u ain't the only one. I like this poem I am wondering if I could put this on my author page (don't worry I'd put ur name on there)!
~Yahiko~
I luv u!
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