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The Dragon’s Treasure or The Prince’s Horde

The Dragon’s Treasure or The Prince’s Horde

To be hidden from the horrors of the world.
To be cherished as an unique specimen and
honored as a creature of grace and beauty.
I would be the Dragon’s Treasure.

To not be trapped in a glass cage and
placed on a pedestal by the prince so he
may display me to all of his associates.
I would not be the prince’s horde.

To be lady of the caves
goddes of the treasures
and keeper of the scrolls
I would be the Dragon’s Princess

To not be queen of war
countess of destruction
and holder of death’s touch
I would not be the Prince’s Captive.

Author notes

This is a draft I need recomendatins on how to fix it, something is wrong with the flow, the beat, and the diction.
Written January 28th, 2006

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  • MiseryLovesMe
    January 28, 2006
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    YAY!

    i think this is awesome. personally i do not think it needs to be changed. unless maybe adding moreeee, because it rocks so much.