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Beach & th boss

BEACH  &  THE BOSS

After the hectic day in the Office
I had been to the Beach to relax a while in Peace.

A long glance at the un-ending Water Table
Made me think of a neat and clean Office Table.

The small flow of water that gently caressed my feet
Felt like the p.a. telling me that Boss is calling.

The white foam at end of the huge wave
Reminded me the moustache my boss had.

The hood of the Wave shining in the light
Is as same as the top of my boss shining equally bright.

The Wave fell on me just like the papers from my brief
Drenching me fully and making my relax very brief.

When I rang the doorbell of my house with clothes wet
My wife opened with a word “Why are you so late”
And closed it behind me after a look at my wet
Clothing saying, “Is that [from] your Boss again”??

- T.V.R.BABA.

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  • LadyMidnight07
    February 9, 2006
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    this is funny however it does not go with my contest so i am removing it. sorry
    great job thoguh