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Hold on

Midst our darkest moments,
There will always be a light.
One that will guide us to bliss,
Aid us, Help us, Know us.
To turn our backs on happiness,
To turn our backs on friendship,
A sin incomprehensible.

It is easier to let oneself go,
But more valuable to hold on.

In our worst hours,
A hand will reach for us.
From a Beloved one,
Help us grow, encourage us.
Pushing away the joy,
Pushing away the memories,
A torture unconceivable.

It is easier to let oneself go,
But more valuable to hold on.

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You know who you are whom i had in mind.
Written January 27th, 2006

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  • D8TisMeXD
    January 28, 2006
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    Oh, thank you. I'm just trying to be a little optimistic i guess.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 27, 2006
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    Great!

    This is a breath of fresh air as most of the poems submitted recently are quite gloomy and sad.. Well written!