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I Promise My Love

There can be no love like ours,
The softness of the clouds,
The beauty of the flowers,
Can't describe our love making hours.
Our love is something special,
Something new and different,
That we have yearned to experience.
My love for you will never be fake,
My heart, my soul
And love will always be true.
We can take our love to the moon,
After what we have been through
We deserve nothing but the stars.
Our past will fade, our future
Bright and new, filled with true
Beauty of life and love.
Let's take a chance to live
And discover our inner soul
With the beauty of love.
Time will heal those haunting
Deeply engraved wounds
So compressed within.
No more of the past,
Only bright, beautiful
Days await us.

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Written May 10th, 1999

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  • J Rhys Davies
    December 27, 2003
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    To put it in a singular word, awesome. This is the kind of stuff that love is really all about.

    "My love for you will never be fake,
    My heart, my soul
    And love will always be true."

    Simply beautiful. How I long for someone to feel this way about me again.


  • July 10, 2002
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    excellent

    Yes, take a chance. something good may come of it. Something lasting and oh so wonderful.

  • EmB016
    November 25, 2001
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    Very nice piece of writing, and something I definitely can relate to.


  • November 24, 2001
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    beautiful poem indeed and i can relate to the feeling. Nice work

  • shadylady
    November 24, 2001
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    very beautiful, and well written.

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