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Shallow Thoughts







Shallow memories..
Was it just a short while, or can
memories play with reason..
kept hidden till prodded..provoked
into lies..distortion
Imaginary or real..what is
reality..as we see it or as
others perceive scenarios
of long ago
The happiness scrolled deep
in brain cells act to keep alive
once pleasing thoughts..darkness
still lingers on in the hidden nightmares
Volumes of enormity swirl endlessly
waiting..watching for the right
moments then slipping into
redundancy..
Alone..haunted by forgotten data
cut as puzzles.. fragmented
beyond the realms of
recovery…..


 


 


 

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Written January 27th, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    January 29, 2006
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    Yes they were definatly closing in on me but that was then...this is now Thank you my friend for your thoughts, as always they lift my spirits


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 29, 2006
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    Thank you


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 29, 2006
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    Thank you KAT, I am deeply honored


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 29, 2006
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    Thank you yes, sadly life can have it's highs and lows...this was one such time


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 29, 2006
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    Many thanks for your comments, as always they are greatly appreciated


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 29, 2006
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    Many thanks my friend Delighted that you enjoyed it


  • Deke
    January 28, 2006
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    Hello Lynne, Here you have up and created another masterpiece. I love the way you write my friend; you are a wonderful poet. See you again soon.
    Deke


  • puzzledone121
    January 27, 2006
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    memories are hardly shallow if they linger...if one is deeply affected as described here..or maybe one tends to lock in such memories--or they'll continue to haunt...oftentimes, we tend to rationalize our past...specially mistakes and when we can no longer redeem what we have lost...we try to detach ourselves from the past...but what we perceive thru our senses continually remind us..a certain look, mannerism, an innocent rose, a certain smell plunge us back to the irretrivable past...i know the feeling...and thanks for sharing....


  • January 27, 2006
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    This is well done, explains what life is like so often.


  • iamliarface
    January 27, 2006
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    God I really love your work I'm really going to have to add you as a favorite and believe me your SUPER SPECIAL if you get added on my friends list...Once again...great write
    KAT


  • MorningWinds
    January 27, 2006
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    This is beautifully written.Inceredibly deep.Greatjob


  • wattle silver member
    January 27, 2006
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    My, my, my Ms Cutie, sounds like you feel the walls are all laughing at you this morning. It's not true they are only smiling. Lovely Poem, Thank you.

  • cutiepie gold member
    January 27, 2006
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    Thank you..yes this situation happens to us all at some time or other..not an endearing thought...but a thought never the less


  • cutiepie gold member
    January 27, 2006
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    Thank you Yes one of my distant moments

  • rebelchild420
    January 27, 2006
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    this poem is very good. it describes your feelings very good, i hope to hear more of your writes so please keep writing

  • Ir.muse
    January 27, 2006
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    This is a great piece dear friend.This is a situation that we all face in our lives sometimes.Don't worry,you can get over it soon.
    Shahrzad

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