Six feet under is where I seem to be
Lying in a grave you made for me
Eyes closed, arms crossed
Your love came at a pricey cost
Throw your roses upon my putrid grave
Say your goodbyes, for there痴 nothing left to save
The rain will wash the beautiful petals red
Through the ground, into my last wooden bed
Its colour will kiss my frozen lips
And awaken my body, right to the fingertips
My eyes will open and my arms will unfold
My body will glisten, as it once did of gold
Out from the earth my body will appear
The wounds you gave me are still crystal clear
My aim is precise, revenge will be mine
Your lifeless body will be a picture divine
Your body I値l lay where you rested me
Revenge is sweet, wouldn稚 you agree?
Good night, sleep tight, sweet dreams my dear
To your revenge, I知 sure you値l adhere
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Written January 27th, 2006
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awww baby this is really really good, and carlas right your poems just get better. well i havent been in 4 a while but ill c u 2moz babz...n i hope ur cumin for the meal.
luv ya biatch
Luv Jess
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Your body I値l lay where you rested me
Revenge is sweet, wouldn稚 you agree?
Good night, sleep tight, sweet dreams my dear
To your revenge, I知 sure you値l adhere
OHHHHH! Hunni, this is so so good1 You were telling me about it in maths. I loved that last stanza, it just made me smile, Mike better watch out if he ever hurts you!
I just loved everything about this poem, you seem to get better everytime you add a new one, your making me look so bad
Excellent write sweety,
Love!
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'Its colour will kiss my frozen lips
And awaken my body, right to the fingertips
My eyes will open and my arms will unfold
My body will glisten, as it once did of gold
Out from the earth my body will appear
The wounds you gave me are still crystal clear
My aim is precise, revenge will be mine
Your lifeless body will be a picture divine'
Those are my favorites. Your poem picked me right up and im clapping. ^_^ Tis a very good poem. I was searching through the dark poetry section and yours caught my eye. So I read. The other dark poems today were upsetting because they didn't seem dark. I'm out of inspiration too. You should check out my dark poetry. Well my old ones..<.< they're actually sorta good. Loved your poem. Byee
Cassandra Chan
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Excellent
absoultly excellent wow i love it revenge is so sweet the way you set this out and the words wow love it truely wicked
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