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Mommy, please tell me why...

Mommy, please tell me why
milk always is white,
who made a day
and who made a night?

How light come out
from the bubble of glass,
why water is clear
and green is grass?

Who made a chocolate
and why cookies are sweet,
why cherries are red,
why I must brush my teeth?

Why daddy is daddy and who made a bus,
why birds are flying,
why we do not have a puss?

Why candies do not last
Why granny need a glass,
why I am a boy and sister is lass?

Oh my sweet baby, I need a break...

I love you mommy, but mommy,
I have some news for you,
I wet my pants...

Oh, if that was all...
I love you too.

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Bronze contest trophy:
allpoetry.com/ Contest/177135 1

BT: allpoetry.com/ Contest/177135 1
Written January 27th, 2006

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  • Jesann gold member
    June 14

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    Ha ha !!!!!
    Ah yes...the relentless "why's"... & their constant curiosity.
    Though it was amazing, some of the things they would come out with.
    A wonderful write...brings back many memories.
    Very clever, well done.


  • Sonja
    February 6, 2006
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    Thank you my dear friend. There is no need for any apologies. It is not easy to comment all poetry we read here. From time to time I am doing the same.
    ~sonja~


  • Legend silver member
    February 6, 2006
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    Sonja I know i read this before I can not believe that i did not comment before.My apologies. A wonderful poem with that cute little kick in the tail.Congratulations on a well deserved award


  • Sonja
    February 6, 2006
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    Thank you for trophy and for sweet comment Frozen - Tears
    ~Sonja~


  • Sonja
    February 6, 2006
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    Thank you Arsenic
    ~Sonja~


  • Frozentearz
    February 5, 2006
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    Thank you for sharing this delight with us
    and congratulations on your award
    it was truly a really cute write...
    Thanks for sharing
    FrozenTears


  • Arsenic-
    February 5, 2006
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    That was very cute and kind of funny.... bright spot on the day actually. Thank you for entering.


  • Sonja
    February 4, 2006
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    Thank you Sandy


  • Sandygram
    February 3, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Ah this is sweet. I can remember my kids at that age. So adorable. Wonderful write. Best of luck in the contest. Take care, Sandy

  • Sonja
    January 30, 2006
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    Kids are at the same time mirracle of love and curiosity. When I will be able to be back in the past, I'd like to have back my chanse for more kids.
    ~Sonja~


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 30, 2006
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    SO CUTE AND ADORABLE

    This is so sweet! the last thing he says is just so funny and adorable.


  • Sonja
    January 29, 2006
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    Thank you AT.
    ~Sonja~


  • -Tesoro-
    January 29, 2006
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    Lol. i like this alot it reminds me of me kinda lol i ask "why" ALOT about like everything.. great job it was really cute

    ~Turtle

  • Sonja
    January 27, 2006
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    Thank you Dawn. Yes, it was a nice time but I never had enough time to answer all my son questions. He was always so curious. We often read books to find out all secret of this world.
    ~Sonja~


  • DawnBaby
    January 27, 2006
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    Great Job

    This sounds familiar, sounds like any child under 10 years old, the "why's" I had to laugh this is too cute! As usual Sonja, wonderful job. Brings back those memories!

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