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Love, Come Back

Love, Come Back


Oh, night wind blowing through the trees outside,
Wafting through the windows of the cars going by,
Whipping up the whitecaps on the waters of the sea,
Blow my love back to me.

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Written January 27th, 2006

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  • pigeon43
    April 14, 2006
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    great!

    so simple yet shows a feeling complete -
    right on!