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Don't Break Down

I know what it's like to have your heart broken
to have it stomped on over and over
until you can't breathe anymore
and you feel like your dying inside
like there's nothing more to live for

It seems you always get hurt
and end up crying your eyes out
over someone who was too blind to see what they had
causing you pain yet again
and leaving you depressed and hopeless

But don't break down
I know its really hard
but you have to stay strong
so many people care about you
and would die if they lost you

I love you like a sister
and will always be here for you
no matter what happens in life
you mean so much to me
and I wouldn't be able to stand losing you

Author notes

This is just to one of my best friends Brandie, who deserves alot better than she gets.

also, im not sure if its done or not.
Written January 26th, 2006

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  • bambam18
    May 1, 2006
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    its good

    its good


  • Neko of the Stars
    March 27, 2006
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    great job hailey that was excellent yea life is a bitch and most people dont realize that or just plain out dont care in this world its pretty much just finding a way on your own but it is good to have a friend to talk to and im sure bradie even though i dont know her is glad to have you as a friend anyways keep the ink flowing love ya like a sis

    -Alexis

  • forgotten kisses
    January 27, 2006
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    that is sooo....nice....brandie needs the encouragement....no offense brandie i love u....... keep it up.......
    love yah hailey......
    Jennifer

  • Bloop
    January 27, 2006
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    aww its so sweet Hailey..i agree with u..I love u and Brandie so muches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !KiMmY!


  • Drunk Off Tears
    January 27, 2006
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    Wow hailey thanks..really i love this ans your so right about it all. I dunno why everyeon has to "pick" on me for i mean all i try to do is give them love and i never recive it back no matter how hard i fucking try! well anyway great poem!!!!!

    Loves,
    Bran


  • Forever-Damned
    January 27, 2006
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    Wow! Ok, well you sorta convinced me that there is a way out of this shitty state im in! Its just gonna take time! And not to take the easy way out! Thankyou so much for that! This is a GREAT write and I totally love it! Well done

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