i want to suffer no more
I've had this dream before
fight after fight, war after war
the pain i see, i can't take it any more!
we both feel hurt, feel sad, feel pain
each time we cuss, like heavy, pouring rain
we never win, never gain
always acting, oh so vain
never have i seen a day
when we have something nice to say
there's always an insult thrown each and every way
what time it will stop, i cannot say
after a fight, i hide in my room
i look at the sky and stare at the moon
lock myself in 'till the next day, maybe noon
crying each minute, thinking my life = doom
I'm tired of suffering, tired of it all!
why can't we stop? let the topic fall?
I've suffered enough, too many times i have crawled
it's time to stand and stop this once and for all
Author notes
i feel what i feel.
and that's the truth. this is exactly what has been happening to me for a while now with my mom.....
Written January 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- current emotions, feelings. by Southern Twilight.
320 points, ended February 16, 2006, 17 entries
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whoa this was a really good write, very poetic. I felt though that some of the rhyme was forced and unnessisary...but overall it was really deep, painfull, powerfull in the heart. i thought it was really good.
keep the ink flowing-
Trennen
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