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Family Generational Tradition




In the barrenness of this old place,
in winter season's defining grace.
I often stroll here seeking a peace,
it's telling history an endless release.

 


As it's legendary story telling reflects,
of a bygone lifestyle put to the test.
It's furnishings now aimlessly scattered,
broken in piled heaps that used to matter.

 


In bits and pieces strewn across it's floor,
broken glass and mud crusted plates galore.
Humble rough hewn table thick with dust,
dilapidated chairs that smell of mold and must.

 


Old photos left in scrapes within cold fire hearth,
recalls a family farm of pride now thrown apart.
Humility echos through these decaying walls,
where once stood strong in efforts long.

 


A tranquil peace I find in remembrance of,
a dieing breed who harvested in shared love.

 




                       ~~~~Suseann~~~

 

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Written January 26th, 2006

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  • Samplette gold member
    January 28, 2006
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    A gorgeous sonnet....and you truly looked deeply in the shadows of the picture. Thank you for entering.
    sam


  • Sherry gold member
    January 28, 2006
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    Excellent piece Susan you captured
    the picture very well my friend.
    Great story in pulling all this
    together in its inspiration. Sherry~


  • Vickie J
    January 26, 2006
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    You got all of this out of that picture???? I need me some glasses that offer insight. This was outstanding. I read the last two lines over a few times-that captures the history that is worth remembering. Best wishes in the contest!~vj