MYSTIC ENCHANTRESS
Mere words can not describe feelings
You play a harp on our heartstrings
Such beauty, elegance and grace
This Pixie's love you will embrace
It is without any refrain
Canto after canto will rain
Endearing, her works you will clutch
Nexus of life in her soft touch
Creative, her pen is golden
Heraldic, her words embolden
An angel of mercy she is
Noted for being such a wiz
Terrific is all I can say
Remember, check out her display
Emblazoned, simply understood
S he'll never be misunderstood
She's the meaning of sisterhood
Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)
January 26, 2006
Author notes
For my dear Pixie sister Elba (Mystic Enchantress)
OMG, I do have a head cold, but I didn't think it affected me so badly. I have just gone and added in two letters that I missed. My thanks to Jim (Desert Knave) for noticing I forgot my last 'S', it made me recount because I knew there was an odd amount of letters in the name when I tried to do this as a backwards acrostic. Nena dear sister, what a booboo your sister made and yet I was still given so much praise. I hope you enjoy the corrected version of this.
Written January 26th, 2006
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Skieomally, Thank you very much for the applause and your words that are so humbling.
Elba (Mystic Enchantress) is such a wonderful person and a fantastic writer. The ink which flows from her pen is golden. Studying to be a doctor, she is an angel of mercy. All the praise I bestowed on her was deserved and more. Thank you again. Love and blessings for you, today and always. 
Joyce
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I think if I were to get such high praise and care shown to me that was put into this poem, I would be one lucky girl.
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Steven, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely comment. Yes my sister is a wonderful person and such a fantastic writer. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this, I enjoyed writing it very much. It's good to see you back.
Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always. 
Joyce
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awesome write
beautifully written and i would have to agree that she is a wonderful person.. well done and thank you for sharing your words with me.
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Roz, Thank you sis for the applause and the lovely comment.
I am very happy that you enjoyed my tribute for our sister.
I am getting better, it's one of those winter colds that just doesn't want to let go. Love and blessings for you sis, today and always. Joyce
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Lol Joyce, it's worked out to be a fine acrostic in the end. Awww you poor thing, do you feel better now?
Love & hugs,
Roz
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Sunny Day 4
This is my chart because judging was killing me.
Joy 20
Love 20
Wonder 20
Whimsy 16
Style 15
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Edited on Jan 28 because ''. -
Mage Amazigh, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely comment. I'm so happy that you found it to be very beautiful as my sister is just that. She's an AMAZING writer too. Love and blessings for you, today and always.
Joyce
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Very beautiful.
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Jim, Thank you for the lovely comment and such an astute observation. You helped me to realize I also missed the N in her last name. I knew it was an odd amount of letters from having started out trying to make it a backwards acrostic.
When I went back to edit I never removed my previous lines and somehow I forgot to put in the two letters. You are a blessing for helping me to correct my blunder. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always.
Joyce
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Nena,
I felt so terrible when I read Jim's (Desert Knave) comment. Then I counted again and saw only 16 letters so I knew something else was missing. 
Thank you so much for your love and understanding. No more applause is necessary, your words are all I need. Lots of love for you sis and you are my blessing. 
Joyce
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Awe sister it is no problem... I loved the first time and I love it even more the second time... You are a wonderful Poetess and if I could applaud this work one thousend times I would but it only gave me one... dang! I love you sis, you are a blessing. Thank you! Blessed be, Nena
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A beautiful dedication and a wonderful use of the acrostic poetry form. I do have to ask... is there a hidden message I am missing that is the reason for no line for the final "S" ? ~Jim
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DP, Thank you so much for the lovely comment. They really aren't as hard as everyone thinks. If you like them they do tend grow on you. It is a form that I am very fond of. I'm very happy you enjoyed this so much. Give a holler if you want to try one. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce
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Linda, Thank you so much sis both for the applause and the loving comment. You are just as wonderful my dear sister.
Keep your ink flowing as you flow by. LOL
I'm very happy that you enjoyed this. Love and blessings for you sis, today and always. Joyce
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how do you ppl do these, i can do a good one of these with help, lol. this is a great poem. it is loving and just incredible. keep it flowing
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Joycew, this is a wonderful acrostics, be proud of it, and the love you show, shines through and through..keep penning and I will flow by now and again to read..
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Terry, Thank you so much for the applause and your kind words. I'm very happy that you found it to be great, my dear AP sister is great and I wanted to show her that. Keep writing.
Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always.
Joyce
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Excellent
Great Poem Joyce :-). -
Kelly, Thank you so much gf, I'm very happy you enjoyed my work for my sister. She is a fantastic poet and such a wonderful person. Thank you for your applause as well. Love and blesings for you my friend, today and always.
Joyce
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Exellent
Lovely poem Joyce -
Aunt Sonja, I want to thank you for the applause and the beautiful words that you just wrote for me. My sister inspired those words through her Pixie love and light. Also, through the beauty of the works she shares with all of us in here.
I did feel that last line summed it up and it fit the rhyme perfectly.
Love and blessings for you my dear aunt, today and always. Joyce
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Few nice words and lovely verses could open the heaven's door, but you have done something so nice for your friend, as you said in your last line:
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She's the meaning of sisterhood
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Thank you for this acrostic beauty.
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Humbled by your words!!!!!
Nena, I did try to do a backwards acrostic which was even harder considering the letters in your pseudo, as I got near the end I forgot that I hadn't counted the number of letters.
It was an odd number and wouldn't work. 
Thus I went back and created the rhyming form which I do tend to like the best so far of all the acrostics I've tried. I guess we both are honored as you are such a dear sister and as for the words I leave behind on your works, that is the inspiration you leave in me. You're very welcome and thank you for yours as well. Also, don't ever let your golden pen run dry. I would be devastated. Love and Light will shine in your heart always and forever. Your sister, Joyce
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I am Honored!!
My dear sister Joyce... your words brought tears to my eyes as I was reading your work. This is truly an honor for me. You are a great writer and many other things I was not able to say on my Acrostic to you as I ran out of letters... but you are one amazing Pixie. Someone I could always count on when the mood is just down and someone I can share my happiness with. Ever since I started writting under this pseudo, you have been reading my poems and always leaving the most amazing and encouraging words. You have a great heart and I am proud to be and be considered by you like a sister and a friend... it is a priviledge to be in your family. Thank you for honoring me today with this beautiful acrostic... for sharing your great talent with me and for the wonderful GIFT of your ever loving pen. Love and Light always and forever, Your Sister, Nena... Blessed be! -
Jim, Thank you so much for the applause and such a humbling comment. You have your sister blushing now. That is the type of inspiration my sister leaves me with. I'm very happy that you found it to be so great. Thank you also for the standing ovation and good luck wishes. Lots of love for you and the family, Joyce
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What a great acrostic! Awesome! Perfect! Excellent! Totally breathtaking! I'm running out of superlatives. From what i know Mystic Enchantress, you've hit right on the penny. Very clever poem, Joyce. You know you have my standing ovation, and a resounding applause, and I wish you best of luck in the contest!! Jim
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Liz, Thank you so much for the applause and the lovely comment my sweet niece. She is a fantastic poet and has a heart of gold. I hope she enjoys this as much. I'm very happy that you did. Lots of love, Auntie Joyce
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grannyeri, Thank you so much for your wonderful words. I know I have done quite a few acrostics. They were the first form to really jump out at me until I discovered the kyrielle. I want to get more of those done too, they are always filled with beauty. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always.
Joyce
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Lovely piece, Auntie. Truly enjoyable to read and a great description of a wonderful poetess. Great job! Have a good day!
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Janet, Thank you so much my dear cousin for the loving words you leave wherever your Pixie wings do alight you.
With love we Pixies light the world and your light is the brightest. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce
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CAN'T BELIEVE HOW MANY OF THESE ACROSTICS YOU HAVE WRITTEN - HAVE YOU KEPT TRACK? Amazing how you just keep turning these out.
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Loving each other means there is more dew and mystic sunshine for me to bath in. Cool.
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