You know the feeling when it all got too much,
The feeling when your head was full,
Full of hurt, memories and pain.
The hazy smell of pure confusion.
Moving from one chapter to another,
Why wont it leave you, the pain, the memories, the hurt.
Why can you feel it choking your knotted soul in ten pieces.
Why cant you leave it at the door, and close it for good.
I love you, You don't,
I want you, You don't,
I'm different, Your not
Your special, I'm not.
Believe me... i cant,
Trust me... i wont.
Trust is like a gust of wind, it blows from time to time,
Some days stronger than others, it crashes when you least expect it.
Causing destruction, tearing things piece by piece.
Feelings of pure hatred for the ones who made it this way,
The ones that tore my insides in two,
The ones that made me carry it through to the next day,
The ones who took it all away.
My heart, my soul, my mind...... my wind.
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Written January 26th, 2006
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This really made me think of my ex husband ... wow, that was amazing ... you really know how to open up to the reader ... you have the most perfect imagery ... and it's all lined up with your thoughts and feelings ... emotional ... very well written ... and very well thought out ... keep writting sweety and i promise to continue reading!
Smile, It Confuzez People
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nice work thanks for the entry
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brilliant write honey !!!!!!!! keep it up and best of luck goes to you in my contest
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"Trust is like a gust of wind, it blows from time to time,", dear friend, I think trust is not like a gust of wind.... Its like a source of water... many drops of water come and go, but the source remain the same..
Trust is like a root of a Tree, many distrusted leaves come and go, but the main root remain the same.. and it goes on stretching its arm of hope, positiveness and confidence.
don't take it another way.
Mukti, Nepal
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Wow this is incredibly deep. Well done!
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wow i agree with mai crimson, i love that bit too! and KrayZ, let me shake your hand! but then. there's always hope and faith... the moonlight and sun of the ever changing weather of our lives what a great poem, this one!
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I know this poem as if I wrote it myself...well, the feelings anyways...excellent piece...powerful emotions........
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Your pain shines through in this poem. One line disturbs me though. "Your special-I'm not." Don't let anyone take away your value. You are special, we all are.
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Beautiful
This was beautiful. I can really relate to this one...I have had a lot of stuff like this in my life. Keep up the good work -
Heart wrenching.
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Woh! This is really good! I can totally feel pain in here.
"I love you, You don't,
I want you, You don't,
I'm different, Your not
Your special, I'm not.
Believe me... i cant,
Trust me... i wont."
This has to be my favorite part of the whole thing because it really catches my attention. You really have skill; those lines have a very unique pattern. Please keep writing.
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