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Desire

Teasing and tantalizing,
wrapped up in one
All three of us living
incestial desire

The taste
of sweet nectar
spilling
from silken folds
into awaiting
lips that have brought
on such a waterfall
flow of liquid sugar
caressing tastebuds

Soft mounds
dance with our
movements
Buds harden from
the cool air
as our song's
volume abruptly
explodes into
a series of
melodic screams

Thighs quiver
under the pressure
and yet
we could never have
enough

Tongues swirl in and out
at a ballet of ecstasy
in pink and ruby lips;
muffling our song
or turning up the
volume on bust

Dusk 'til dawn
we move in absolution,
the droplets of rain falling
sensually across our bodies,
gliding through our ecstasy
and heightening the effect
of our body heat
in our deadliest of sins

Desire

Author notes

An incestial threesome...simply because Slyvyr calls me sis, so I think I'm a sister now.
Written January 26th, 2006

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  • MelinAyala420
    December 18, 2007
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    i love it!

    WONDERFUL!!!

  • Hekate gold member
    November 5, 2006
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    deep

    This was a very nice read. You've done good. The best of luck to you in the challenge. I enjoyed reading it.
    Kari

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 31, 2006
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    Very good write here...I really enjoyed reading this, your imagery was great with this too.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    I think if I lost my talent, I'd go insane. I'm glad you enjoyed my entry. Good luck to you and Sylvyr with judging.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    February 22, 2006
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    A unique idea that I have not had the pleasure to read previously. You truly have a talent here my dear I pray you never lose it. Your work is inspiring in more ways than one. I very much enjoyed this piece. Well done my dear very well done!

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    January 27, 2006
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    yep, as long as I can watch I don't need to participate

  • GauArrowny
    January 27, 2006
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    Hmm, almost made me jealous. Nicely written poem. Well, I'll just have to reclaim you for myself when I get out there. *moans to the thought of your scent*

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 26, 2006
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    Lesbian threesome is definitely your style, hm?

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    January 26, 2006
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    oh yeah, what a tread to come home to. and I noticed there is another addition to your story waiting for me as well. yay

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 26, 2006
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    Your comments are ever so amusing...and hyperness is graaaaaand.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 26, 2006
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    Tempting indeed.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    January 26, 2006
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    Oh my. This is, like, hardcore smut! Smutsmutsmutmsutmust! Only.. not. 'Cause, it's not smut. I'm just hyper, and yessss.. *Blink.*

    I really don't know what else to say about this, other than it's really hot. ;] Makes me wanna touch myself; down there; with a.. uhm.. Oreo!? .. I don't know.. Lmfao. ._.

    Lovely write, as always, darling. ♥

  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    January 26, 2006
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    Well now... this is something I had not thought of but could definitely inspire some more work... I love it... LOLOL.. hmmm... threesomes... especially three women...

    Tempting, tempting....
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