Teasing and tantalizing,
wrapped up in one
All three of us living
incestial desire
The taste
of sweet nectar
spilling
from silken folds
into awaiting
lips that have brought
on such a waterfall
flow of liquid sugar
caressing tastebuds
Soft mounds
dance with our
movements
Buds harden from
the cool air
as our song's
volume abruptly
explodes into
a series of
melodic screams
Thighs quiver
under the pressure
and yet
we could never have
enough
Tongues swirl in and out
at a ballet of ecstasy
in pink and ruby lips;
muffling our song
or turning up the
volume on bust
Dusk 'til dawn
we move in absolution,
the droplets of rain falling
sensually across our bodies,
gliding through our ecstasy
and heightening the effect
of our body heat
in our deadliest of sins
Desire
Author notes
An incestial threesome...simply because Slyvyr calls me sis, so I think I'm a sister now. 
Written January 26th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Sinfully Seductive by Celticmoon.
400 points, ended February 22, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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i love it!
WONDERFUL!!! -
deep
This was a very nice read. You've done good. The best of luck to you in the challenge. I enjoyed reading it.
Kari -
Very good write here...I really enjoyed reading this, your imagery was great with this too.
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
I think if I lost my talent, I'd go insane. I'm glad you enjoyed my entry. Good luck to you and Sylvyr with judging.
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A unique idea that I have not had the pleasure to read previously. You truly have a talent here my dear I pray you never lose it. Your work is inspiring in more ways than one. I very much enjoyed this piece. Well done my dear very well done!
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yep, as long as I can watch I don't need to participate
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Hmm, almost made me jealous.
Nicely written poem. Well, I'll just have to reclaim you for myself when I get out there. *moans to the thought of your scent*
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Lesbian threesome is definitely your style, hm?
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oh yeah, what a tread to come home to. and I noticed there is another addition to your story waiting for me as well. yay
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Your comments are ever so amusing...and hyperness is graaaaaand.
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Tempting indeed.
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Oh my.
This is, like, hardcore smut! Smutsmutsmutmsutmust!
Only.. not. 'Cause, it's not smut.
I'm just hyper, and yessss.. *Blink.*
I really don't know what else to say about this, other than it's really hot. ;] Makes me wanna touch myself; down there; with a.. uhm.. Oreo!? .. I don't know.. Lmfao. ._.
Lovely write, as always, darling. ♥ -
Well now... this is something I had not thought of but could definitely inspire some more work... I love it... LOLOL.. hmmm... threesomes... especially three women...
Tempting, tempting....
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