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This Love Doesn't Suit Us

VERSE 1
You know the top that you buy
That doesn’t fit you
But you wear it anyway?

You know the thing that you do
That doesn’t look good
But you do it anyway?

BRIDGE
You know the feeling that you get
That doesn’t suit you
But you feel it anyway

CHORUS
Well that’s just like
The way that I love you
I know it doesn’t suit me
I know it doesn’t seem right
But I feel it anyway
And I can’t stop loving you

VERSE 2
You know the food that you buy
That doesn’t taste nice
But you eat it anyway?

You know the thing that you say
That doesn’t sound good
But you say it anyway?

BRIDGE
You know the feeling that you get
That doesn’t suit you
But you feel it anyway

CHORUS
Well that’s just like
The way that I love you
I know it doesn’t suit me
I know it doesn’t seem right
But I feel it anyway
And I can’t stop loving you

You know the feeling that I get
That doesn’t seem right
But I feel it anyway?

Well that’s just like
The way that you love me
You know it doesn’t suit you
You know it doesn’t seem right
But you feel it anyway
And you can’t stop loving me

Well that’s just like
The way that I love you
I know it doesn’t suit me
I know it doesn’t seem right
But I feel it anyway
And I can’t stop loving you


Copyright ©2006 Kat 'Lost Faith'

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Written January 26th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 26, 2006
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    I love songs. Hopefully, we will be able to work on one together one day.


  • January 26, 2006
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    How true we cant help loving someone even though we know they are doing us no good atall. Been there my friend done that. I liked the way you versed this and the rhyming was good too. Its obviously a song pity I cant hear you sing it