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Alphabetized Passion

Aroused
By
Curves,
Desiring
Erotic
Fulfillment.
Getting
Hotter
Inside.
Just
Keep
Loving
Me.
Need
Oral
Probing.
Quivering,
Rapidly
Spreading
Thighs.
Undulating
Violently.
Welcoming
Xanadu,
Yes!!!
Zion!



©2006 StormGoddess

Author notes

This was written at the request ( a challenge ) of a friend.  It was to be one single word for each line...each starting with the appropriate letter of the alphabet.  I must admit, it's harder than I thought.
Written January 25th, 2006

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  • my-masquerade
    February 4, 2006
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    amazement

    wow! This is amazing. you got across your meaning with the utmost clarity and yet you went alphabetically. this is so much better than those acrostic peices that aren't really related at all. This is talent! Don't delete this, its genius!!
  • Levity
    February 4, 2006
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    No words suffice.

    Astounding! I am flabergasted. This is a connected, sense-making piece of work in what is possibly the hardest format I have ever heard of. How long did this take you to write? Oh, and you are the first author added to my list of favorites. Incredible...Incredible. I dont know what esle to say.

  • silverflameca
    January 28, 2006
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    This is neat - an odd word to describe 'adult poetry' I know, but I don't really know what else to say. Any ways, it's cool that you were able to meet the challenge and like the commenter said, you did it while still making the poem seem like poetry - awesome!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 26, 2006
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    Thanks hun. I am kinda glad someone sid something..I almost came in and deleted this today. I know, I should never do that,but.. well I was thinking back and thought it really sucked!!

    Hugs,
    Autumn
  • Antwon123
    January 26, 2006
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    creative

    You did an excellent job with the challenge and to be honest as I was reading I forgot what the title was, then when I read your comment I had to go back and look at the first letters... to me that is a sign of a great write in that it was not overbearing as far as working the letters out.. I enjoyed it very much... by the way I have been having some trouble with my server and not getting any emails and such out... this is a treat to be able to get on AP this morning... talk with you soon and keep up the excellent writing.
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