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Hope

A
A kid
A kid with
A kid with no
A kid with no dad

The
The dad
The dad with
The dad with no
The dad with no kid

Both
Both at
Both at two
Both at two ends
Both at two ends of
Both at two ends of the
Both at two ends of the earth

Not
Not knowing
Not knowing what
Not knowing what each
Not knowing what each other
Not knowing what each other look
Not knowing what each other look like

The
The kid
The kid is
The kid is fifteen  
The kid is fifteen and
The kid is fifteen and just
The kid is fifteen and just found
The kid is fifteen and just found out

Dad
Dad is
Dad is thirtyseven
Dad is thirtyseven and
Dad is thirtyseven and doesn't
Dad is thrityseven and doesn't care

Is there hope? Sure. But as long as it took for you to
read this and how dumb it was to write it like this,
is how I feel waiting on my dad and I've never met
him. I steel have hope.








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Written January 25th, 2006

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  • CodehX
    July 11, 2006
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    Very nice on how you wrote it.. and I feel sorry for you.. you keep writing poems you hear me!!

    ~LostSoul~

  • wood 36
    February 8, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment! Nothing much just hanging out do much of nothing. How about you?


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 7, 2006
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    Ohh...That was AMAZING!Very interesting poem and I enjoyed reading it...You know...I'm sorry for your dad.I hope you'll find him!
    Thanks for your comment!And...what's new
    Keep writing
    Best Wishes
    ~LostMermaid~

  • candyecane2002
    January 26, 2006
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    KENDLE!!! OMG This is soooo awesome!!!! Kendle!!!! WOW...