The air is freezing
My mind is bleeding
I'm frozen in your illusion
Your heart is cold
It has frozen my confidence
And you have stolen my pride
I need the warmth
Of a helping hand
Something you don't have
I try to speak
But my words are chilled
By your Icy Breath
I'm left alone
Trapped in your icy walls
With no way out
Your a bitch
I need to breathe
So melt these walls
Set me free
I'm becoming numb
I need to thaw
You cannot win
This frosty war
Of what you cant have
I can help you
If you understand
That I cant understand
This shit you show
I do not know
What it means
So you need to know
I am alone
And I need to glow
By Chris Turner on October 26,2004
Author notes
This peom is by one of the best friends that I've ever had. He died on September 12, 2005 from a tumor. He was only 16 years old and everytime he whent to the doctors they told him that he was fine and that it was all in his head. And they were right. Finally after dying 3 times in a helicopter on the way to the hospital and going brain dead they decided to pull the plug and did a cats scan of his head and found the brain tumor. I haven't been able to write anything for him yet because I can't put anythings into words for him. Nothing that I write gives him the justice that he deserves. So util I can find a poem that does him justice I thought that I would re-post my favorite poem of his so that people can have a second chance at reading it. Hope you enjoy 
Written January 25th, 2006
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when i started reading this i almost cried...... i remember u wanted to put this in the yearbook but bc of the word bitch u couldnt.... i really like this poem too.l...... i havent put anything up yet about him bc i cant find words either.... to me there is no word or words to describe him......................................well since i got my internet back (after 6 months without it) i'll hane to leave more comments........ love ya
hillary* -
oh hunny.... this is such a good poem, he really was an awssome poet. I know youve probibly heard "im sorry for your loss" so many times, but I am sorry. I dont know what I would do if my best friend were taken from me like that. But I know that hes with the Lord now. Hes in a place that will treat him right. not in a world where things are tougher than ever expected.
I hope your doing okay sweetie,
havent talked to you since november.
If you ever need to talk, or just wanna say hey, then I m me. kk. I love you.
~Kiersten~
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Breaks my heart
I am very sorry for your loss. I like the flow and pace of the poem, favourite line "trapped in your icy walls". But it is a very angsty and angry poem. Who is the recipient of such harsh words?
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